 This took me about... 3 hours. My proudest part of this comic is the face palm.  Even though, it's not very good...Also, this is just the prologue, so nothing really happens... just introduces the characters... kind of... OKAY THIS PROLOGUE WAS POINTLESS (except to introduce the letters). I hope this isn't cliche because of the title.  FEEDBACK PLEASEE! Comments
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05/05/08
xVedris
Guilds: RadiantDawn Groups: Basilmarket's Comic Makers, BasilMarket's Comic Makers! Yeah, I agree. The only reason I can understand it is probably because I made it...
Anyway, I'll delete this one and repost one with borders.
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05/05/08
xVedris
Guilds: RadiantDawn Groups: Basilmarket's Comic Makers, BasilMarket's Comic Makers! Borders updated. It's REALLY bad and ugly because I rushed, but rest assured, I'm going to make the borders neater in my next parts.
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05/05/08
UnknownDemon
Guilds: RadiantDawn Groups: Anime Artists, Basilmarket's Comic Makers, BasilMarket's Comic Makers! We both have made prologues this week!
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Bands: Your mom!
Hmm, maybe add some white? o.o It's still confushing. D: Myabe a dark grey insted of black?
05/05/08
xVedris
Guilds: RadiantDawn Groups: Basilmarket's Comic Makers, BasilMarket's Comic Makers! Updated again. Is it still confusing? o.e
I tried white, but it didn't look that good. I think the current borders are okay, but they're different sizes. o-o"
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05/05/08
xVedris
Guilds: RadiantDawn Groups: Basilmarket's Comic Makers, BasilMarket's Comic Makers! I personally liked the old borders, because... it looked cool.
But, it was also confusing because the old borders hardly showed much change when transitioning through the panels. So, I'll probably keep these borders OR get the old ones to show up better.
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05/05/08
Rybear
Guilds: FlatZone Groups: Basilmarket's Comic Makers, BasilMarket's Comic Makers!, Cake Lovers You could try mixing the two...
have the old embossed borders, but put black lines where the panel ends to emphasise the transition from panel to panel :]
Bands: The New Pornographers ._.
Rybear said: "You could try mixing the two... have the old embossed borders, but put black lines where the panel ends to emphasise the transition from panel to panel :]" qft. This idea is win. Looks great, is this that whole tower idea thingy?
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Try using light greyish purple for the borders...
OR you can try doing the opposite of embossing with the panels and leave the black borders... I forgot what it's called.
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05/06/08
xVedris
Guilds: RadiantDawn Groups: Basilmarket's Comic Makers, BasilMarket's Comic Makers! Gofsodon said: "Looks great, is this that whole tower idea thingy?" Yeah.  ----------------------------------------------------- Thanks for all the suggestions for the borders, guys. ^^
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