A little cliche with the other realm.
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Written by YungSinobi on May 06 2008
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We got into a rowboat, and rowed to the other side of an oldy shaped rock. VIr listen to me. I nodded in respect. My villiage has darkblood. We are rowing into the Caster Sacrifice realm. Its a banished place separate from our world.Your going to see me change and you will also feel a little shock,becasue of your blood. Im going to be the same Fisk my my magic will be stronger here, and your magic will be more effective,but weaker. Uhh Fisk i don't know any magic... Trust me if i know about your people you will learn one by insinct. Ok get ready Vir. Yes sir,i braced my self down next to Kila. Now entering the Caster realm. AHHHHHH,i screamed as loud as i could it hurt so bad. Kila held me down. It felt as if my innermost soul was being burned in hell.My left eye was seeing ghosts,demons, and other dark intities. Kila put this over his eye.i looked up at Fisk and noticed he changed he had wings,like an angel, but much blacker. Vir calm down its Kila, im going to help you please let me put this on. She put a small black bandana across my eye.She prayed over it and that "little" shock was over. Thank you Kira, i smiled huged her and stood up. Fisk what is this place? The Crimase, its a light table. I walked around and looke onto the wall there was some symbols. I knew a few from the Caster Ship,but some were odd to me. I saw the words: Destroied, VIllage, Eclipse, and moonlight. Comfusing,but it ment nothing to me.Kira seal the Castergate, I feel Death. I saw the caster ahip. The very boat i was raised.On the mast was Captain. O my if it isn't Little Fisk. How are you Fisk? Fisk grabed his sword which also changed alot. Don't your remember me, hows mommy and daddy? The crew members became deformed, like hellish monsters. They all looked alike, execpt four of them. He jumped down, and unsheathed his sword. He looked at me hard and the monsters went away. But his sword became enlarged. You gave me a pretty little scar, but your parents recieved the hight of it.Bring them to me. HERE ARE THE SACRIFICES!!!!! MOM DAD! I ran at the ship perched up high onto the towering rocks.Fisk used some magic to hold me back. The tears ran. Then the Captain showed his true self. Vir stand back. yes FIsk,i wiped my eyes and realised i couldn'tchange the past,even though i had decapatated parents and I couldn't change that. Kila was looking at me and still putting up seals. SO your name is Vir now? Sounds more like Vermin to me! I started to get confident. I had a reason to fight. Fisk let his spell go. So then Mr.Captain Caster. Whats your name? I see no reason why i can't tell a dead man my name. Its Corinth. COrinth...Fisk's face stoped and his wings spread. IM GOING TO KILL YOU!!!! Kila whats wrong with him?Corinth killed his clan. What!? THey fought and Corinth became even more powerful. Fisk's sword what so heavy,but he moved it as if he was stick fighting. Corinth's sword became claws. He was using a sealed magic known as Karta. It absorbed All dark energy slowly, but its sealed becasue it can consume people. Kila ran to the boat ,and i had to see what was wrong. My work is done Vir! Good luck i beleave in you. Fisk was moving so fast. It was almost as if he was moving in frames. Corinth was preparing for an attack. RELEASE!!! Fisk and i were flown aacross the small cave. YOu ok Fisk? He didn't respond he kept on charging him. Corinth walked into the table witth all the dead bodies and said "Enter soul, with body cold, lonely life, you die tonight." FISK THATS WHAT I SAW IN MY DREAM!!!! THen i looked...Fisk was in the pile of dead bodies. On my chest was a note. I knew this wasn't over.... | |
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talking.... is... so... dam... confusing. And the changing name or Kila and the wings part and everything is all jumbled up... just slow down the plot, and add some detail!
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