Heros Episode 3: Lost and Found.
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Written by YungSinobi on May 06 2008
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And that’s how I ended up on your ship Lord Fisk. He looked at me with the craziest face. Lord Fisk is what he calls himself a “Savior of Seas" he told me he ran away from home at a young age. In my eyes he must be. He can only be about 23 years old. His ship has 4 members, they are all runaways. Calos, the oldest, is who "runs" the ship. He is a genius in all ways.
Kila, the only girl on the ship, is 16 and very quiet (i can't keep my eyes off her). Batly is Fisk's brother in someway, and promised me sword lessons. The last person is...well i have no idea. He stays in the bird’s nest all day he doesn't even talk.


Well you still haven’t told me your name, he said with a laugh. Uhh i have no idea sir...i really don't. Fisk stood up and looked away. What do you want most in life kid? I want to save the world, i guess. You guess!? He sharply turned around and looked me dead in the eye. I jumped back, but he was to fast. You can't guess about saving life. You can not GUESS if you want to stop someone from killing your mother, YOU CAN NOT...then he let me go, dropped me, and walked away.


I sat down and talked to Kila for a hour. She told me about her old village and how she didn't escape. She is on what her village calls a "life quest" its simply leaving the village for 3 years. She told me of her brothers and sister. Her sister was actually a famous Holy Crusader (a combination of Knights and Bishops). MY life with Fisk's crew is great. WE aren't your typical pirates we don't pillage and plunder we simply live free on the sea. When she said that i knew what I wanted to do here. Live with them, live free on the sea.

The Fisk wants to see you, said Calos, who was keeping his sword ready on his side. Uhh ok, Kila ill be back id love to talk more, but uhh yea. I ran across the Pretereo (that’s the ships name). I walked into Fisk's chambers and he was thinking, extremely thinking. Vir come sit down. Excuse me sir? You said i want to save the world. Vir means hero. Now about this slave ship, since your family now i can't have a man holding your blood family captive. Now were's it at. I remembered seeing a small figure blessed with magic that moved on a map anywhere the ship was. It was close to were Fisk's little wooden ship was. FIsk were close to the ship. That’s the ship of...Vir that’s not a slave ship...that’s a caster ship.A caster ship? Worshipers of dark magic. Your people are known for one thing. Your light magic. If they sacrifice your people they get more magic in return. Its dangerous stuff. I believe in these waters they are going to Heska Shrine. Calos is moving us closer to them. we should be there any minute now. WE will meet them their before they can kill anyone.

Let me see your sword. I handed it to him and he snapped it in half. MY SWORD!!! I was broken. Vir stop being foolish, that was just a sword sharp enough to kill someone. He said he wanted to adopt...,Fisk interrupted, no he WANTED to use you. Casters can't kill innocent blood before a sacrifice. I was awe struck. How can i fight then? He gave me a small blade that was also a shield, and a long black sword. The shield, is Calamos, the goddess of sight. The sword, Heytai, named after the goddess of light. Thank you Fisk, but why these two? Your blind in your left eye, laughed Fisk. What’s that mean? You can't see out of your not right eye, sheesh its simple. Come on deck i will show you. I readied myself and Fisk had a sword almost the size of him. It was big, red, and had a mean looking curve.


He swung down and purposefully hit the shield. My mind went blank and i saw every move he was going to make, but it happened very fast. He focused and started to attack me, i was able to defended every blow, but i couldn't get the shields ability to work. I remembered a few attacks from the 1 vision and attacked his left. Fisk started to laugh, why do you fight Vir? I started to realize that I am fighting for a purpose. DO you know VIr? He swung down hard. I fight for peace! What is peace Vir? Stopping the darkness in the world. What is the light Vir? By this point i was mad. Light...IS THAT SMALL HOPE IN THE DARKNESS. Fisk took off his glove. This spar is over Vir. Nice talking to you. Get Kila, were at the alter.

Comments
A little overpowered weapons, maybe a bit more background to the charaters, a bit more detail on casters, etc. I'd probably start out with normal weapons (like Eclipse does). Before basil, you'd probably want to run all your episodes through a spell checker. Pretty good though.
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Talking a bit confusing >.> But Otherwise, more detail, a bit more interaction, and the weapons should have a background too if they are uber powerful!
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