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Addiction-4-?
Posted by ChaoScorpion on September 29 2008
So...my 4th comic i know its messy...any suggestions where to cut it in half?

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I think i might have to remove those "You have gained" things
Blogs: Blank

That porcupine looks a LOT like SPIKEY!
Bands: PCDS

I know the story is mainly about the guy with the walkie-talkie, but he only appears in 2 panels throughout the whole comic. This comic is more random and doesn't really have much to do with the storyline. But hey, that's just one opinion.

As for shortening it, I agree with you. You might want to trim those down a tiny bit.
Bands: CIARA!!, Cold Play, HelloGoodbye, Kanye West, Lupe Fiasco, KARINA PASIAN!!

*sings*
It's raining helms!
Hallelujah, it's raining helms!

Penut uses Future Sight and foresaw the next comic scenario.
Bands: Tool, Disturbed, Linkin Park, Three Days Grace, and Persona 3\'s OST

Lololololo.

It's really random, but you did a good job with the visuals!

I didn't see the pokemon battle coming i liked it



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