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Last Quest #8
Posted by Gofsodon on June 28 2008

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Awww.... that was nice chapter :]
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Wow, you have a very unique style. Awesome chapter.

I have no critique, maybe it was a little too short (a perfect chapter is 4 lines, not 3).
Just my thought tho.
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Yeah, I felt it was too short as well. I just don't want to leave off in the middle of the fight, so yeah.

OMG THE SLIME COULD'VE CHOKED ON HIS APPLE.

The slime puked up the apple D= was he choking?!?!?
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Oh, by the way, here's a tip. On the second to last panel, try to add movement to the character and some facial expression.
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This is one of the best series on basil/profil3/anywhere :]
One suggestion: The slime's mouth is a bit too small to puke up the apple :]
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Zivota said: "This is one of the best series on basil/profil3/anywhere :]
One suggestion: The slime's mouth is a bit too small to puke up the apple :]"


It looks like he already puked it up, and is in the process of closing his mouth

Great series by the way! ^^
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YAY

its awesome. You're as pro as Etokapa!
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This is win. Anyone who says diffrently fails at comics.




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