BasilMarket's Comic Makers! Group
My hair is taller~
Posted by RightJustice on June 23 2008
ok this is my first screen submitted on profile so sorry if any information and stuff is wrong. also, im not submitting my other comics until i update them with good backgrounds and stuff

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is the bottom part coming for u guys cause i think its an upload error for me but im not sure help guys 1st time doing this
Blogs: Epic Ban.
Bands: SOAD; 50 cent; Eminen; o nd btw i dun like LP

ok its fine now after i resubmited plz ignore the above comment and the double post of the pic
Blogs: Epic Ban.
Bands: SOAD; 50 cent; Eminen; o nd btw i dun like LP

This was on basil loooooooooong ago.
Bands: Aerosmith > All Else.

ya i no Im putting all of my oldies up here b4 I make a few new ones.
Blogs: Epic Ban.
Bands: SOAD; 50 cent; Eminen; o nd btw i dun like LP

I have some suggestions for improving your comic

Don't use 'space fillers'. Just design your comic so it won't have any extra space.
Position chat bubbles correctly.
"*stops suddenly*" is not something someone would say.
Conserve chat bubble space.
Improve the plot. What does having tall hair have to do with anything?
Try spelling things correctly. You wouldn't really say 'dun' or use '2' had you been saying these things in real life.

penguinsrock said: "I have some suggestions for improving your comic

Don't use 'space fillers'. Just design your comic so it won't have any extra space.
Position chat bubbles correctly.
"*stops suddenly*" is not something someone would say.
Conserve chat bubble space.
Improve the plot. What does having tall hair have to do with anything?
Try spelling things correctly. You wouldn't really say 'dun' or use '2' had you been saying these things in real life."



thx I will improve on what you said and btw the reason having tall hair not having to do with anything is why I made this comic. In short it doesnt have to do with anything, so i made it
Blogs: Epic Ban.
Bands: SOAD; 50 cent; Eminen; o nd btw i dun like LP

The.. spelling.. and... grammar...


AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

*hides*

Haven't I seen this before? e.e

:wink:
Cya around guys i sure had fun!
:winkwinkwink:

That part creeped me out
Bands: Im cerial.

'Cya around guys, I sure had fun!'

Now THAT made me laugh for a looong time.
Blogs: Don't go in!
Bands: Only here for BMCM.

...So so...

Is there a lawyer in here? My eyes would like to sue him.


Blogs: Blogs
Bands: Paramore. Forever. NAO.



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