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Varun's comics - Shumi
Posted by varun619 on May 28 2008
My first comic ever. And what better group to post in

Please give me some constructive criticism

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I like the joke
But, ask Jay (Lexus), you just don't make comics about Emo's.
Criticism: You might want to add Facial Expressions to Shumi.
Well, she doesnt really look sad or anything, you know?
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Really like the joke though, its funny
Bands: Danko Jones, Red Hot Chili Peppers, Good Charlotte, SR-71

Zivota said: "I like the joke
But, ask Jay (Lexus), you just don't make comics about Emo's.
Criticism: You might want to add Facial Expressions to Shumi.
Well, she doesnt really look sad or anything, you know?
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Really like the joke though, its funny "


Can you teach me how to add facial expressions to Shumi? I don't really know how.
Blogs: Stereotypes.
Bands: Panic! at the disco,My chemical romance,Fall out boy,Tokio hotel,The rasmus,etc.

Well, you could either try to edit Shumi's real face,
or take a face from bannedstory and place it on Shumi's face.
lemme try this, okay?
Bands: Danko Jones, Red Hot Chili Peppers, Good Charlotte, SR-71

Zivota said: "Well, you could either try to edit Shumi's real face,
or take a face from bannedstory and place it on Shumi's face.
lemme try this, okay?"


OKay
Blogs: Stereotypes.
Bands: Panic! at the disco,My chemical romance,Fall out boy,Tokio hotel,The rasmus,etc.

The text bubble is kinda weird on your guy. Any reason for picking that one?

Also, the emo jokes are hardly funny. Only cassadians was good. I have an emo XGF, so I just personally get extremely pissed off whenever someone does an emo joke. But that's just me.

P.S. My GF went suicidal after I dumped her. I wouldn't ask someone out who was already emo.
Bands: Aerosmith, Deep Purple, Blue Oyster Cult, Linkin Park, Metalica, Muse

*starts wondering HOW you dumped your gf *
Bands: Danko Jones, Red Hot Chili Peppers, Good Charlotte, SR-71

Zivota said: "*starts wondering HOW you dumped your gf *"


She wanted to get married... I dumped her that night... (I'm a freshman so when your GF says that, you know your f**ked).
Bands: Aerosmith, Deep Purple, Blue Oyster Cult, Linkin Park, Metalica, Muse

better than what i can do

How do you get backgrounds anyway?
Bands: None o_0

THE EXTRA WHITE SPECE IN THE TEZT BOXES, IT BURNZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!

-sizzle-

LexusXDawn said: "
Zivota said: "*starts wondering HOW you dumped your gf *"


She wanted to get married... I dumped her that night... (I'm a freshman so when your GF says that, you know your f**ked)."


Wait, how old are you o.0
Whenever i have a gf they dont want to be married all of sudden..
o.0
Bands: Danko Jones, Red Hot Chili Peppers, Good Charlotte, SR-71

This is really your 1st comic? I thought you made several other comics.

Zivota said: "
LexusXDawn said: "
Zivota said: "*starts wondering HOW you dumped your gf *"


She wanted to get married... I dumped her that night... (I'm a freshman so when your GF says that, you know your f**ked)."


Wait, how old are you o.0
Whenever i have a gf they dont want to be married all of sudden..
o.0"


she must be a wacko oO no offense. Im freshman too in hs
Bands: matchbook romance

can0fsoup said: "
Zivota said: "
LexusXDawn said: "
Zivota said: "*starts wondering HOW you dumped your gf *"


She wanted to get married... I dumped her that night... (I'm a freshman so when your GF says that, you know your f**ked)."


Wait, how old are you o.0
Whenever i have a gf they dont want to be married all of sudden..
o.0"


she must be a wacko oO no offense. Im freshman too in hs "


Gawd I feel ancient. =(
Bands: Anything?

I guess you could probably have a better joke?
Emotional issues aren't really funny...
Bands: Linkin Park. ^.^

penguinsrock said: "This is really your 1st comic? I thought you made several other comics.
"


Haha that's not me. That's my friend. He wanted to be in my comic.
Blogs: Stereotypes.
Bands: Panic! at the disco,My chemical romance,Fall out boy,Tokio hotel,The rasmus,etc.


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