12, angels, Basil, comic, Maplestory, market, part, threeComments
There has to be a way for you to make this better, it's not really hitting off a "pro" comic with me, but it's not a "noob" comic either. There has to be a way ...
*smacks self*  i like it, CONTINUE OR FEEL MY WRATH.
05/27/08
Zivota
Guilds: RadiantDawn Groups: BasilMarket's Comic Makers!, Lost System, Zivota's Obsessed fans. Even though the fighting scene took like 10 parts,
and Sachiel (?) looks really weird, and grendel is in every comic/animation these days, I really like it Michael is gonna get powerleveled
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yay another comic...keep this up man or I will get a l4z3r ch4rg1ng mudk1pz on you
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Bands: matchbook romance, so they say, hidden in plain view, hawk nelson
05/27/08
Rybear
Guilds: FlatZone Groups: Basilmarket's Comic Makers, BasilMarket's Comic Makers!, Cake Lovers i think you made a typo in the first panel
"You, Jonas, will go to Orbis first and find out where Lucy, Janus is most likely with her." other than that, it's great, as usual!
Bands: The New Pornographers ._.
Ooh, nice!
The only thing that's bugging me about this is that the pannels don't transition well (dialogue, I mean). Try to make the dialogue flow more, and it will be better! ^^
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