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Golden Legacy 03- Crap or not?
Posted by CrossWind on May 25 2008
As the title suggests, should I scrap this or keep it as the intro to part 3? I dunno what is wrong with it but it feels wrong.

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It looks okay........but it might feel wrong because the electricity is still on his sword but his staff is absorbing electricity from the ground.
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It definitely isnt crap.
but, make the rest of it, i can't really say anything about a few panels
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Maybe he should be facing the other way in the 3rd pannel?

Edit: Or maybe make it so he's looking behind him?

Pretty =D`
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The magic's swinging towards me!

OMG OMG OMG!

Maybe you should put another panel in it, with silverfox making a pose with his sword?
I think it's too direct, first panel is an attack.
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I can't criqute it since I can't do any better. It looks amazing to me.
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I think if you combined the 2nd and 3rd panels, and have him looking behind him, it would flow nicer
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Third panel - make him looking to the right.
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thats good :]
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