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Tragedy at Ludus Lake - Prologue
Posted by xVedris on May 05 2008
This took me about... 3 hours. My proudest part of this comic is the face palm. Even though, it's not very good...

Also, this is just the prologue, so nothing really happens... just introduces the characters... kind of... OKAY THIS PROLOGUE WAS POINTLESS (except to introduce the letters).

I hope this isn't cliche because of the title.

FEEDBACK PLEASEE!

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Yea! -wantsmootogettheheckouttaherecuziwannabeinittoo-
Blogs: Ugh.
Bands: Can ya guess?

WEEE Looks really nice =) Keep the panels like that, I think it looks sophiscated.
Bands: Anything?

I like how you separated the panels

and I love it so far! ^^
Bands: The New Pornographers ._.

-Hugs comic-

Epic.

You need a better border line for the panels.
Other than that awsome job.
Bands: Red Hot Chili Peppers, Gorillaz, The Doors

Keep Borders: 2
Change Borders: 1
What to do?!

Also, should I submit this to Basil?

Order of panels is a little off. You might need to stick another arrow in.
Bands: Aerosmith, Deep Purple, Blue Oyster Cult, Linkin Park, Metalica, Muse

I made a thread with the story plot on it... but I guess it disappeared. o-o"

LexusXDawn said: "Order of panels is a little off. You might need to stick another arrow in."


Really where?
The long panel goes directly to the panels on the far left.

Bands: The New Pornographers ._.

YAY!! Thankies. ^^
*Posts it again for no reason.*

I'm gonna submit it to Basil. Whoo-whoo?
Never mind, I'm not.

I need more pannel sepration. D:

It make brain hurt.

-twitch-

So, I should change the borders? o-o"

Keep Borders: 2
Change Borders: 2

Looks good! I've been reading manga lately, so I almost read this right to left but I stopped myself.
Bands: In teh beginnin Ceiling Cat maded teh skiez An da Urfs, but he did not eated dem

Yes, you should. It makes my head pop.


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