Yea! -wantsmootogettheheckouttaherecuziwannabeinittoo-
Blogs: Ugh.
Bands: Can ya guess?
Also, this is just the prologue, so nothing really happens... just introduces the characters... kind of... OKAY THIS PROLOGUE WAS POINTLESS (except to introduce the letters). I hope this isn't cliche because of the title. FEEDBACK PLEASEE! Comments
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WEEE Looks really nice =) Keep the panels like that, I think it looks sophiscated.
Blogs: My birthday...
Bands: Anything?
05/05/08
Rybear
Guilds: FlatZone Groups: Basilmarket's Comic Makers, BasilMarket's Comic Makers!, Cake Lovers I like how you separated the panels
and I love it so far! ^^
Bands: The New Pornographers ._.
-Hugs comic-
Epic. You need a better border line for the panels.
Other than that awsome job.
Bands: Red Hot Chili Peppers, Gorillaz, The Doors
Keep Borders: 2
Change Borders: 1 What to do?! Also, should I submit this to Basil?
Blogs: Can YOU Make Comics?!
Order of panels is a little off. You might need to stick another arrow in.
Bands: Aerosmith, Deep Purple, Blue Oyster Cult, Linkin Park, Metalica, Muse
I made a thread with the story plot on it... but I guess it disappeared. o-o"
Blogs: Can YOU Make Comics?!
LexusXDawn said: "Order of panels is a little off. You might need to stick another arrow in." Really where? The long panel goes directly to the panels on the far left.
Blogs: Can YOU Make Comics?!
05/05/08
Rybear
Guilds: FlatZone Groups: Basilmarket's Comic Makers, BasilMarket's Comic Makers!, Cake Lovers
Bands: The New Pornographers ._.
YAY!! Thankies. ^^
*Posts it again for no reason.* I'm gonna submit it to Basil. Whoo-whoo? Never mind, I'm not.
Blogs: Can YOU Make Comics?!
I need more pannel sepration. D:
It make brain hurt. -twitch- So, I should change the borders? o-o"
Keep Borders: 2 Change Borders: 2
Blogs: Can YOU Make Comics?!
Looks good! I've been reading manga lately, so I almost read this right to left but I stopped myself.
Bands: In teh beginnin Ceiling Cat maded teh skiez An da Urfs, but he did not eated dem
Yes, you should. It makes my head pop.
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