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Edited Comic
Posted by UnknownDemon on May 02 2008
Remade comic, more constructive criticism wanted.

Comments
HAHAHAH BURN TOWN BURN

I liked the other one better for some reason.
Both good .
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I'll submit to Basil now then.
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Still slightly cliche. o.o

Oh well, most comics are slightly cliche. The plot isn't (that much). It doesn't have 1 Uber-powerful hero that kills everyone. There is at least 1 custom weapon per main character, and there are 8 main characters. So far the plot is, I focus on this character, then he meets up with the others one by one, revealing each one's story.
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lol its so funny and i just noticed.

Unknown Legend was the title of my old comic =P i like it the script looks awesome
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Wow! I never knew. I've never even seen your old comic.
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o.o custom weapon or not, just the fact of having a custom weapon doesn’t make it not cliché. Yay double negatives! The names are cliché, and the storyline has the chance to be.

Hey, this actually kicks off the ground in a smooth direction. You're good at writing plots. My only advice to you is to download gimp 2.2, and use the flare brush as fire (your fire sucks lol ).
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Epic win kay?
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Sounds like a cheesy poem
(AN UBER MEGA AWESOME CHEESY POEM!!!)
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