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Unknown Legend Prologue
Posted by UnknownDemon on May 01 2008
First comic. Constructive criticism wanted (before I submit to Basil)

Comments
People might make fun of the hair, but I really like it. ^^
The fire in the town looks kinda weird, though.
Bands: Quit lookin'!

I'll give you some advise.
Inverted ANYTHING does not look professional, and try to thing of a better into then "and this is my story" I'm pretty sure that's from "Avatar the Last Airbender"
Also why is there no white in the guy's eye?
Bands: Red Hot Chili Peppers, Gorillaz, The Doors

I don't like the names :
Shadow, hope, blabla
Blogs: Mah plans
Bands: Danko Jones, Red Hot Chili Peppers, Good Charlotte

I never knew the Avatar thing. The white = screwup cuz i use paint. Names- hope dies, so no big problem, and he doesn't know his name. I'll change the intro into something about legends like, "You've heard about Hercules, St. George, and others. But this is an Unknown Legend". I'll take out his name and rethink it later (dictionary.com, here I come [synonyms]!.
For the inverted thing, I just couldn't get it to look red enough. Like it was burning and everything, so I just gave up. If somebody could help me with making it red and look like it's burning, I'd use it.
Blogs: Help Exchange
Bands: Nothing right now

yeah, I would deffinately reccomend using different names... more original ones :]
Bands: The New Pornographers ._.

UnknownDemon said: "I never knew the Avatar thing. The white = screwup cuz i use paint. Names- hope dies, so no big problem, and he doesn't know his name. I'll change the intro into something about legends like, "You've heard about Hercules, St. George, and others. But this is an Unknown Legend". I'll take out his name and rethink it later (dictionary.com, here I come [synonyms]!.
For the inverted thing, I just couldn't get it to look red enough. Like it was burning and everything, so I just gave up. If somebody could help me with making it red and look like it's burning, I'd use it."


I use paint but the white is still good...
Bands: Red Hot Chili Peppers, Gorillaz, The Doors

I could help you, just PM me.

Hope works.

Shadow is too used.... then again you can use it if you want.

looks good to me =D continue ^_^
Blogs: Metroid
Bands: 3 Doors down

Goatfry said: "Hope works.

Shadow is too used.... then again you can use it if you want.

looks good to me =D continue ^_^"
Blogs: Don't go in!
Bands: ><, everything BUT Jonas Brothers :O

Can't help but notice the last panel is kinda blunt.
The spear is just stuck in somebody's body.
Blogs: Mah plans
Bands: Danko Jones, Red Hot Chili Peppers, Good Charlotte

Yeah, I'm trying to come up with a new name (synonyms work great!) and the last panel is sort of obvious because of Mr.Basil's no blood or anything.
Blogs: Help Exchange
Bands: Nothing right now



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