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Basilmarket Tales 1, Phone Call.
Posted by Supermen123 on April 18 2008 Basilmarket Tales, Phone Call.
I tried making a long comic again, is it better this time?
Before submitting it, please tell me what things I should fix and I will try to fix them.
If people like this, I may continue.


Comments
In the 9th panel when the guy says, "Nope, I can't spot any difference." I found that a bit too... trying to be joke. I mean, I like the joke and all, but saying that kinda seems redundant to me. Iunno, just what I think.

But, I love the screenies in the screen section.
Bands: Quit lookin'!

What's with the little white spots in the borders?

xVedris said: "In the 9th panel when the guy says, "Nope, I can't spot any difference." I found that a bit too... trying to be joke. I mean, I like the joke and all, but saying that kinda seems redundant to me. Iunno, just what I think.

But, I love the screenies in the screen section. "


Agreed. Yuval, try making the guy in the middle think something like "Idiots...". Also, the quality of the picture is kinda bad, try to fix it a bit. I like the idea though, it will only last like 5 episodes though, haha.
Bands: Hedley, Linkin Park, Red Hot Chili Peppers, My Chemical Romance, Faber Drive, Em

CROSSDRESSER ALERT.
Bands: Avril Lavigne, All American Rejects, Yellowcard, Linkin Park

LOL @ cross dresser
Bands: The Who, Animal Collective, Architecture in Helsinki



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