Eternal Assassin -

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04/12/08

Supermen123
Groups: Basilmarket's Comic Makers, BasilMarket's Comic Makers!

Wow, this is actually getting pretty good

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I'll be looking forward for more.

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04/12/08

Zivota
Groups: Abridged Series Fans, Anti-Hackers United, Bannedstory Animations

I like it!
But next time, make sure all the characters are actually standing on the ground.
In panel 2, 3, 7, and 8 the assassin is floating.
Also, i suggest you work on what the characters say.
"I...have lost.", "This is bad" and "But one question. Who are you?" are pretty much overused IMO.

It's just a suggestion

Keep on making them, they're pretty good :]

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04/12/08

Safefoxver
Groups: BasilMarket's Comic Makers!

Alot of good stuff is overused. That's why it's overused.

And i like this, just make sure everyone has their feet on the pixel ground! =D
(And it's nice, your on you way to being awsome

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04/12/08

lamRight
Groups: BasilMarket's Comic Makers!

Zivota said: "I like it!
But next time, make sure all the characters are actually standing on the ground.
In panel 2, 3, 7, and 8 the assassin is floating.
Also, i suggest you work on what the characters say.
"I...have lost.", "This is bad" and "But one question. Who are you?" are pretty much overused IMO.

It's just a suggestion

Keep on making them, they're pretty good :]"

Basically, my only quarrel is the things aforementioned and "The end" at the end. It should be "to be continued"

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04/12/08

Heck
Groups: artists!, Basilmarket's Comic Makers, BasilMarket's Comic Makers!

....also make what the people say a lot more realistic.
In the real world when someone is about to die, i doubt their last words would be "I...have lost"
Good job though, you improved.

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04/12/08

penguinsrock
Groups: BasilMarket's Comic Makers!, Bera Player

I still wanna know his past, who the Narican possessors are, what everyone's abilities are, who the tan warrior guy was, and how Cheesy can down Balrogs like butter, but he can't take one hit from the back by an MDT. =/

NIDS MOAR PLAWT.

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