It was a good comic; I enjoyed it.
Work on your panels and word choice. ('jacked of all my money')
Also try to make your speech bubbles more even
A square is a solid shape, but unsolid lines of text don't go with it.
I feel text should either be abstract, and outside a bubble (as with Etokapa's effects) or as even as possible inside the bubble.
Work on your panels and word choice. ('jacked of all my money')
Also try to make your speech bubbles more even
A square is a solid shape, but unsolid lines of text don't go with it.
I feel text should either be abstract, and outside a bubble (as with Etokapa's effects) or as even as possible inside the bubble.


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