Prototype
Posted by xVedris on November 21 2007
This is a prototype. I know I need to put a filler between panel 6 and 7. Please post suggestions for a plot/mood/stuff/etc/whatever. Thanks. ^^

Comments
Add a little more humor I think... Otherwise 2 thumbs up =)
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no forget humor D=
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T's kinda missing it.
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I don't think you need humor but its optional. As always good plot, and your editing is getting better.
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Yeah, I might just start all over. I didn't really lay out a plot for this anyway. Lol.



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