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Ok. Here is the "trailer" of my silly little violent nooby horrible stupid script.
th1z iz w4i c0mp13x f0r m33 t0 m4k3. j00 m4ke 1t pl0x. kthxbai.
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Le Dahlia Noir (The Black Dahlia)
Part 1: “Trailer”
Narrator: In January 15th, 1947, Elizabeth Short was found mutilated in Leimert Park, Los Angeles, California. Short was cut in half, given a “Chelsea Grin”-her face was slashed from her corners of the mouth and cut until her ears-and drained of blood.
Narrator: What would you have done? What would the Police, the LAPD would’ve done? Who is the perpetrator? No one figured it out-It is a mystery.
Narrator: What would it feel to be Elizabeth Short? Who was the real killer? Who had caused this entire trauma? What do the letters represent? Could it be a cryptic message?
Narrator: Now, BasilMarket’s Comic Makers Present…
“Le Dahlia Noir”
Made by______________, etc...etc...
Credits to: BasilMarket’s Comic Makers
______________
______________
______________
etc, etc, etc...
Coming soon in a BasilMarket (or w.e.) near you.
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Oh yeah, 1 h4y3 j00 g04t!!!111oneone!@2111`!!!
Dam, I hope your essay on Basil Royale does not totally kill this. 
Dis r comix or it r vdieo?
I wanna be in it ( as always )
Bands: NO, YOU FIRST!
lol wut?
Bands: Linkin Park FTW
DeathDragonZ said: "lol wut?"
Lol wut what?
Since my comp with Photoshop is broken, I cant make a comic even if I tried.
I need someone to make this trailer-comic. 
Yossarian said: " DeathDragonZ said: "lol wut?"
Lol wut what?
Since my comp with Photoshop is broken, I cant make a comic even if I tried.
I need someone to make this trailer-comic. "
Meh just get a cracked ver 
Bands: Linkin Park FTW
Ooo.
Marijuana?
*Arrests*
Ok, I tried to make this, but It all became a mess.
Now I lost all my hopes.
Yossarian said: "Ok, I tried to make this, but It all became a mess.
Now I lost all my hopes. "
You gave up in a hour (comparing this post and your previous one), isn't this going to be a little to violent for Basilmarket? A girll getting cut in half, sounds a little to violent.
Good job on trying to make a comic  .
P.S: You don't put "Basilmarket's comic makers present" before your comic, you do it only when we make a group project .
Bands: Sum 41 and Good Charlotte.
Well, the thing is, that it is true.
I'm just going to like get some of the evidence, interviews, and etc. and make it MS-Style?
Meh, maybe it is a little mature.
Sorry Yoss. Thats WAY worse than Basil-Royale. It's too sick/dark/violent for Basil. Not gonna happen anyway, B-man won't allow it.
Try again Sucks cause you obviously put effort into it but it's just not acceptable.
You're onto a good thing though. If you thought of a REALLY good murder mystery and had it reported and solved like interview style and you create a character who can be ANYONE you want, dig deep into a fountain of personalities and create one for your detective then blow basil away with a murder mystery.
I'm not all violence is the end of the world its just this disgusting stuff ._. people getting cut in half, etc.
Yah...
Bands: 3 Doors down
Goatfry said: "Sorry Yoss. Thats WAY worse than Basil-Royale. It's too sick/dark/violent for Basil. Not gonna happen anyway, B-man won't allow it.
Try again Sucks cause you obviously put effort into it but it's just not acceptable.
You're onto a good thing though. If you thought of a REALLY good murder mystery and had it reported and solved like interview style and you create a character who can be ANYONE you want, dig deep into a fountain of personalities and create one for your detective then blow basil away with a murder mystery.
I'm not all violence is the end of the world its just this disgusting stuff ._. people getting cut in half, etc.
Yah..."
To keep it short and simple: Violence is possible but to create it in a demonic way is kind of...Not for the ages of 10 year old children.
CrossWind said: " Goatfry said: "Sorry Yoss. Thats WAY worse than Basil-Royale. It's too sick/dark/violent for Basil. Not gonna happen anyway, B-man won't allow it.
Try again Sucks cause you obviously put effort into it but it's just not acceptable.
You're onto a good thing though. If you thought of a REALLY good murder mystery and had it reported and solved like interview style and you create a character who can be ANYONE you want, dig deep into a fountain of personalities and create one for your detective then blow basil away with a murder mystery.
I'm not all violence is the end of the world its just this disgusting stuff ._. people getting cut in half, etc.
Yah..."
To keep it short and simple: Violence is possible but to create it in a demonic way is kind of...Not for the ages of 10 year old children."
not always. The more bloody it is, the worse it is. Alot of people have people dying thats normal, i dont really have anything against it, theres a dead girl in my one comic. She's even got some blood coming out of her mouth to show she;s actually dead and not just sleeping.
where as other times its rejected for just having a little blood. its pretty gross when theres blood shooting out but not so bad if theres blood after the stab IMO. My opinion doesnt really reflect mrbasil's but it's gotta be pretty accurate cause its what ive observed thus far. Overusage is pretty messed up too.
iunno.
Bands: 3 Doors down
wait i said that wrong in regards to your comment. What i meant by 'not always' was that demonic isnt really a good word... its more just Dark.
demonic is too strong.
Bands: 3 Doors down
Meh, the theme is dark alright.
I know that =(.
I made a whole script of this for my school, but yeah, Goat, your right.
I just wanted to do about the aftermath and the effects the murder did, not including the murder itself.
And this is basedc on a true story...you know. *shudder*
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