04/30/08
ByMyself
Guilds: FFVII
Groups: Eternity's End : Pokemon Wi - Fi League!, Mapleglobal bellocan Forumerz., Procrastinators UNITE! .... tomorrow.
ByMyself
Guilds: FFVII
Groups: Eternity's End : Pokemon Wi - Fi League!, Mapleglobal bellocan Forumerz., Procrastinators UNITE! .... tomorrow.
Lol, it's fine. I don't proof read at all, so any typos in there are there for a while until I finish the entire thing and then decide to go back and edit the hell out of it.
I usually write later in the day/night when I'm physically and mentally tired. I make simple mistakes, and usually some things don't make sense until I either explain them (as in, what I had in my head that I found difficult to put on paper...err...screen), or that are just poorly worded. For example, when I was listing off the clothing, my intent was for the reader to compare the two characters. I feel that clothing helps express how people view themselves, and also shows parts of their personalities.
The story is actually supposed to be told from Cain's point of view, but with a third person perspective. I don't read often, so usually when I write, I'm going off of what I've picked up from the few books I've actually read (usually teen fiction) and from what I've learned in my English Studies classes at school. I don't actually have a plan to finish this story, though I do have the entire story thought out already. It's just to improve my writing skills, and I do think that it's much better than Solar Eclipse.
Also note that I AM forshadowing a bit....I think I should just make them a bit more obvious...hell, it's only the second chapter though. There is still far more to come...I haven't even introduced the main conflict, or the antaganist(sp?).
I usually write later in the day/night when I'm physically and mentally tired. I make simple mistakes, and usually some things don't make sense until I either explain them (as in, what I had in my head that I found difficult to put on paper...err...screen), or that are just poorly worded. For example, when I was listing off the clothing, my intent was for the reader to compare the two characters. I feel that clothing helps express how people view themselves, and also shows parts of their personalities.
The story is actually supposed to be told from Cain's point of view, but with a third person perspective. I don't read often, so usually when I write, I'm going off of what I've picked up from the few books I've actually read (usually teen fiction) and from what I've learned in my English Studies classes at school. I don't actually have a plan to finish this story, though I do have the entire story thought out already. It's just to improve my writing skills, and I do think that it's much better than Solar Eclipse.
Also note that I AM forshadowing a bit....I think I should just make them a bit more obvious...hell, it's only the second chapter though. There is still far more to come...I haven't even introduced the main conflict, or the antaganist(sp?).
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