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Cute Ariant PQ Guide link
Jun 21
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Jun 20
Poor Shine. Poor poor Shine.
May 07
I want purple umbrella, light purple umbrella, and beige umbrella... But now it turns out there is a maple umbrella too. *Q*
May 07
The price of rice has gone all the way to 14.99 a bag. That's 2X the price. T__T
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ParasolAeris
Level 94 Cetra Priestess of FFVII

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Lol, it's fine. I don't proof read at all, so any typos in there are there for a while until I finish the entire thing and then decide to go back and edit the hell out of it.

I usually write later in the day/night when I'm physically and mentally tired. I make simple mistakes, and usually some things don't make sense until I either explain them (as in, what I had in my head that I found difficult to put on paper...err...screen), or that are just poorly worded. For example, when I was listing off the clothing, my intent was for the reader to compare the two characters. I feel that clothing helps express how people view themselves, and also shows parts of their personalities.

The story is actually supposed to be told from Cain's point of view, but with a third person perspective. I don't read often, so usually when I write, I'm going off of what I've picked up from the few books I've actually read (usually teen fiction) and from what I've learned in my English Studies classes at school. I don't actually have a plan to finish this story, though I do have the entire story thought out already. It's just to improve my writing skills, and I do think that it's much better than Solar Eclipse.

Also note that I AM forshadowing a bit....I think I should just make them a bit more obvious...hell, it's only the second chapter though. There is still far more to come...I haven't even introduced the main conflict, or the antaganist(sp?).
Blogs: Job Hunting
Bands: 3 Doors Down, Three Days Grace, Linkin Park, Nickleback, etc.

charfan said: "I did not know some of this factual information.. All I knew were the terrible juicy bits. Dang, was this for your homeword? Nicely written! (I'm so jealous)
Hehe, you forgot to mention that...
After the korean snipers were televised, there began this stereotyping that koreans were violent and would use firearms against blacks.
Koreatown and the rest (I'm not sure of which areas) were left to burn while the police were sent to guard Beverly Hills. No joke. It was practically fortified there.
There was fire fire everywhere. Looters included all people including Latinos and... well there's a list somewhere.
Some stores would put up a giant sign that would say something like "Black Owned" so they wouldn't be looted.
Oh dang, I was actually going to talk about this to some guildies here. I thought it was just a random thought, but I had no idea today was the anniversary.
Oh and this riot was one of the biggest city riots in history. It was crazy."


No, this wasn't my homework. Like I said, I just wrote it to honor the 16th anniversary of the Los Angeles Riot. oh, and i forgot to give credit again, i copy-and-pasted from wikipedia. i edited the blog with the credit
Blogs: Wth???
Bands: The people who made the MapleStory music.

LOL i should do that XD hahah with the smegas XD
ohhh wow, o_o almost 300k $ o_o
EHHH 6--k$!?! > : O DANG!
Blogs: Guess what...
Bands: Linkin Park, Three Days Grace, Evanescence,.... TOO MANY!! >:O

Lol, it's fine. I know that everyone has their preferences, but I would like to know your reasons why.
Blogs: Job Hunting
Bands: 3 Doors Down, Three Days Grace, Linkin Park, Nickleback, etc.

Man its been awhile i got into itt tech so iv been busy should have gave u guys a for warning but i hd to move fast i just got setup hope u guys arent to mad at me
Blogs: True Story

Chapter 2 of my story us up now. =D
Blogs: Job Hunting
Bands: 3 Doors Down, Three Days Grace, Linkin Park, Nickleback, etc.

charfan said: "there was a weirder party lag than this. remember when you could hear me talk in party when we weren't even in a party?"


oh yeah...too bad i dint get an ss of it D:
Blogs: Wth???
Bands: The people who made the MapleStory music.

WE ARE ALL GOING TO DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CUZ THAT DUDE ATE THE DONOTEAT PACKET!!! NUUUUU

Hhahahah XD stupid quests! DIE AS WELL!

mmm, why is he all alone o_O trying to make himself famous, eh? F1
Blogs: Guess what...
Bands: Linkin Park, Three Days Grace, Evanescence,.... TOO MANY!! >:O

huh?
Bands: Jeffree Star and other ect.

no no I understood your comment, but i was adding a joke about cloud being a guy cause we all know cloud is a guy..right? HAR HAR HAHRHRA -_-
Bands: RED HOT CHILI PEPPERS

-Confused.- o_o
Bands: You.

Who is this creep below my comment o_O
Blogs: old pics#2

yes, that is indeed the first time I met you guys.

oh and that cloudstrife kid. who is a guy, but I dunno.
Bands: RED HOT CHILI PEPPERS

yeah, i changed it to FFXII cuz there IS no FFVII D:
Blogs: Wth???
Bands: The people who made the MapleStory music.

heheheh daydreaming is the best! i can do it all day @_@ XD

Ohhh the password thing..so you forgot about it? o_O or was the boss asking you for it? F1 F1 F1 F1

hahah, the hacker issue. well, at least im proud to say im a legit. full-time legit. :3

LOL THE TREE DUDE!!!!!! POOR CAT!! IT'S STUCK!! > : O

OMG SAY WHAT!?!! -_- NO MORE MAILS, EH?! SO WHY AREN'T THEY FIXING IT ALREADY!? like COMEON, DUDES! you need to FIX it in order for the game get going! Geeezzzz, JUST FIX THE DARN THING FOR THE GUILDS! Gms these days, they just got lazier and lazier!!! if they don't want any more of the mails, then why not SOLVE IT? MMM?
Blogs: Guess what...
Bands: Linkin Park, Three Days Grace, Evanescence,.... TOO MANY!! >:O


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