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I went to a party Mom...
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Written by Leifgreen on August 01 2007
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I got this poem in an Email, and it really made me shed a few tears. I hope when you read it, you will be impacted, and understand why drinking and driveing after a party is dangerous. And not just for YOU!

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> I went to a party,
> And remembered what you said.
> You told
> me not to drink, Mom,
> so I had a sprite instead.
>
> I felt proud of myself,
> The way you said I would,
> that I didn't drink and drive,
> though some friends said I should.
>
> I made a healthy choice,
> And your advice to me was right.
> The party finally ended,
> and the kids drove out of sight.
>
> I got into my car,
> Sure to get home in one piece.
> I never knew what was coming, Mom,
> something I expected least.
>
> Now I'm lying on the pavement,
> And I hear the policeman say,
> the kid that caused this wreck was drunk,
> Mom, his voice seems far away.
>
> My own blood's all around me,
> As I try hard not to cry.
> I can hear the paramedic say,
> this girl is going to die.
>
> I'm sure the guy had no idea,
> While he was flying high.
> Because he chose to drink and drive,
> now I would have to die.
>
> So why do people do it, Mom
> Knowing that it ruins
> lives?
> And now the pain is cutting me,
> like a hundred stabbing knives.
>
> Tell sister not to be afraid, Mom
> Tell daddy to be brave.
> And when I go to heaven,
> put " Mommy's Girl" on my grave.
>
> Someone should have taught him,
> That it's wrong to drink and drive.
> Maybe if his parents had,
> I'd still be alive.
>
> My breath is getting shorter,
> Mom I'm getting really scared
> These are my final moments,
> and I'm so unprepared.
>
> I wish that you could hold me Mom,
> As I lie here and die.
> I wish that I could say, "I love you, Mom!"
> So I love you and good-bye.


Yes, what a great poem. It always brings a small tear to my eyes... What? Lol!
God Bless you all! And, Happy Mapleing! ^_^

*Runs off!*

- Little preacher man.

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I got that in an email, too. It was so sad.
Blogs: Hi
Bands: MCR, Papa Roach, Panic! At the disco, Cold War Kids, Fountains of Wayne

Fake, but sad nonetheless.
Bands: Anything except Retards Attempting Poetry.

it was sad but i dont get something. when u said u drank a sprite instead when did the person start drinking.in the car?
Bands: im currently listening ot black eye peaz,50 cent and kiss.

Well, I don't know. I guess it was just some random drunk dude. LOL! 0_O"

- Little preacher man.
Bands: SubSeven, Disipel, Jars of Clay, Tree63, Toby Mac, Family Force 5, Downhere, YAY

*sheds 5 tears*

I actually counted
Bands: http://www.last.fm/user/Taranoleion/

LOL! Your comment achualy made me laugh: Taranoleion! ^_^
I like that! YAY! ^_^

- Little preacher man.
Bands: SubSeven, Disipel, Jars of Clay, Tree63, Toby Mac, Family Force 5, Downhere, YAY

D; sad
Blogs: lmao >_>
Bands: linkin park, Sum 41, The Frey...

I get those stories a lot. THis one was really good tho.
Blogs: Bored...
Bands: Paramore, Red Jumpsuit Apparatus, Story Of The Year, Underoath,Haste The Day



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