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Written by devilrymage on March 06 2007
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Well perhaps I'm just bored out of my mind and decided to write a poem for no rhyme or reason.
I wanted to try and create a setting really cheerful and the first thing that came to my mind was Valentines Day. Anyway I just want to know what you think about it.

So here it is:

Velveting round the corners,
Arrive mushys and pinks.
Love scents tinting the air gleefully,
Enticement, flowers and winks.
Nights of rushing endlessly,
Tending cards for that one girl.
Ignites and bursts of ecstasy,
Never merrier when 'yes'es unfurl.
Exuberant planning or letting minds go stray,
Still it's undeniably enjoyable on Valentines Day.

Ahaha that took me about an hour and a half to write. Pretty slow, I'd reckon, but acrostics are HARD.
I know Valentines is over, but on the optimistic side I could say I'm writing this 11 months early.

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Forgive me for my, um, shallowness, but what does homie mean? o.O
I don't live in America so I've never heard of that term before.
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