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Written by Herrag on June 04 2008
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I know a lot of people who've been in relationships, messed them up, and wish they could have corrected their mistakes... Hell, I'm one of 'em.

I wrote this poem for those people, and for myself somewhat.

If you've ever felt like nothing you do ever makes a difference, this one's for you.




Ah love, what is it like?
For me, it was like chess
I played so carefully
But lost, it was hopeless...

I found you one day, and boy
I must say I was careless
I fell for you head over heels
But I knew it was hopeless...

But oh, when you returned my feelings
I was overcome with happiness
And of course, it would end just like that
And I'm back to hopelessness...

I wish I was out of this pit of despair
I want to be back in your loving caress
But it doesn't matter, all I am doing
Is proving myself that it is just hopeless...

I want you back, I wish you'd never left
But hell, you're gone, my wishes mean less
I guess it was just never meant to be
For all eternity, I'll be hopeless...

Comments
~tis better to've loved and lost, then never to've loved at all.

how true that is. how true...

~self love, my dear, be not so vile a sin as self neglect.
Blogs: comment here
Bands: alot...mostly J-Rock and Metallica

TobiasBlack said: "~self love, my dear, be not so vile a sin as self neglect."


*steals*

Anyways, nice poem.
Blogs: School...T_T
Bands: 3 Doors Down, Three Days Grace, Linkin Park, Nickleback, etc.

very nice. o.O or depressing, however you look at it.

~Like A Fish~
Bands: ...a lot? Some of them: Matchbox 20, P!nk, Goo Goo Dolls, Linkin Park, Thornley

Damn. ]:
Bands: Kai Tracid

reminds me of myself o.O
Bands: Metallica FTW

*claps* o.o i cant even complain about that one, i liked it.....alot!
Bands: coheed and cambria,aiden, my chem. romance , falloutboy , the acadamey is

Nice. Now that's somethin i can relate to,
Bands: The Vines, The Arctic monkeys, The White srtipes, The Klaxons, The Hush Sound

....dammit...! T-T
Blogs: To move on.
Bands: Nothing

This is a nice poem.
Blogs: Cry
Bands: Three Doors Down, Linkin Park, ect.

uhh hope this is okay, i printed it out and put it by "herrag" would you rather it be danny?
Bands: coheed and cambria,aiden, my chem. romance , falloutboy , the acadamey is

been der done dat....and am back where i started...
dats a good one i dont know u but its a good one
Blogs: well



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