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Hi there Groupies! This is my first comic ever so please help me with any mistakes, I will not alienate you for giving me advice because you guys are obviously more experienced with this stuff. Give me any input on what is already there because I still need to finish up but I am having writers block on how to finish.
I also need a name... I am not creative with names. So any helpful names of the series would be cool.
Credits: IamRight... Showed me how to use Photoshop and let me use his wand design. If you need any help, he is definently the man to go to.
On a side note, where are the rules? I can't seem to locate them anywhere. Heck, I might even be breaking one now for posting this or something  .
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The comic is great, I'll be eager to find out how it continues, but please delete the blog and repost it in the forums.
Thank you.
Bands: Sum 41 and Good Charlotte.
since you are here, can I have permission 
Yes, you may  .
Bands: Sum 41 and Good Charlotte.
I like this. Alot. :3 I like the gleam on the weapons, too. Maybe end it on a cliffhanger with the fight?
I like it. Very organized. ^^
I agree with Mira; cliffhangers are good to hook readers in.
Bands: I can tell you what I DON'T listen to; my parents. I AM SO FUNNY! *slaps knee*
Very nice! I could never make something like that.
Bands: Can ya guess?
Yay for orange hair much?
Bands: Danko Jones, Red Hot Chili Peppers, Good Charlotte
Zivota said: "Yay for orange hair much? "
lol I like orange.
the effects are amazing. your comics have perfect layout and chat bubbles and all that shizz.
i cannot wait to see more comics from you. You remind me of rook, the way you shadow your text bubbles and your effects are super crazy like in your last panel
keep it up
Bands: your face
That's pretty amazing for your first comic... o.O
I love it!
MAKE MORE NAO.
Bands: The New Pornographers ._.
Nice effects! Could you teach me how? I'm perfecting my effects, script, characters, and custom weapons. Please tell me who you made those effects and what you used to make them.
And for the series name, we'd sort of need more detail in the plot.
Bands: Nothing right now
Awesome. Just one thing. It looks a lot like Regime Zero
Bands: Coheed&Cambria, SystemOfADown,RHCP,Rage against the machine.
I know a good title
Breathing heir.
No? how about
Soren'
Bands: Red Hot Chili Peppers, Gorillaz, The Doors
I want to be in the your comic please
Bands: Home Made Kazoku, Lemon Demon, Sum41, etc....
Ohh make more make more! And since you asked for good points and bad points..
Good points:
- Organized
- Font's good. Don't care if it's in all capitals. Basil might but them guys are losers.
- Editing is good
- Grammar is good
- Plot is good
Bad points:
- Couldn't find any really big bad points
- 2nd panel you should put the white stuff over the characters, or put a thin layer over then if you want them to be see able and not blocked out by white (I can understand if the white makes it hard to see, but a little white won't hurt)
Good comic man!
Just think about what the story is about, and don't pick an over dramatic title, or a stupid one, maybe a play on words or a character name? A setting? just do what you want XD
Bands: Muse, The postal service, stuff like that =p
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