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Written by kubaboy01 on February 26 2008

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Heaven
Heaven Time: The Dawn of Time
Earth Time: 2008 A.D.

WHERE ARE THOSE SCAMTICS ON THE NEW PLANET? God yelled at the angels. WE JUST FINISHED THEM! the angels answered. A man walked up behind god. Arnt ya being a little tough on them? the man said. Oh be quite lucifer....., I mean it they shouldnt be working this hard just for a new planet! THIS IS MY NEW PLANET! god screamed YOU SHALL NOT MESS IT UP YOU VILE BEING! *GASP* YOU CALL YOUR BROTHER VILE! Lucifer sceamed at god, BECAUSE YOU ARE YOU MONSTER AND I SHALL NOW SEAL YOU AWAY! God pointed his his finger at lucifer and it began to glow. I SHALL RETURN BROTHER! lucifer cursed and changed into a sprite form and flew away but god catched him. nice try brother but you cannot escape! God yelled. But then a angel run up and hit god in the head forcing him to release him. as lucifer flew away to the new planet that was only a few billion years old (in heaven thats really new) he flew down and looked for a new body.

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02/26/08

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o.O Is you a Christian? cuz this doesn't seem very christian-like... because Christians believe in a benevolent God, and a benevolent God would not yell at angels or yell at his brother. The god portrayed in your story does not seem very much like the Christian God. You make Lucifer sound more like the benevolent christian God.
Also, spell check is your friend. There were so many spelling and grammar errors that it detracted from the overall enjoyment of the story and comprehension.

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03/03/08

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