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| Written by dangthatshot on February 23 2008
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If not here's the link: CLICK! I'm getting some "Thumb's Up!" and still some "Find new Material!" comments... I was hoping some of you fellow "Comic-Pros" could help me out. Please & Thank you! |
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02/23/08
Toxin
Guilds: Flesh, Kokuren Groups: BasilMarkets comic makers!, Group for Me, Ali, Tom, Mike, and Hasan!, Odin Zomg I NO KLIK!
EEF I KLIK U HEK EN SKEM ME
Blogs: DAMIT
Bands: Angels & Airwaves, Alice in Chains, Billy Talent
*clicky* It is like .Hack, but i don't think you should try to copy it. I only read the manga, but it wasn't the best thing, and you should come up with your own ideas unless its a parody. but this doesn't seem like one. To your comic format, put a little space between the comic and the edges, the font could be larger too. For the second pannel, mighjt want to blur the person jsut a tinge to make it less pixelated and messy looking. may want to resize your chat bubbles too to fit the size of the text. Excuse my typos.
You did well with the quiality and backgrounds, which many people often miss. It's skillfull, and better than the majority of the comics on basil.
Blogs: ARGGGGG!!
Bands: Muse, The postal service, stuff like that =p
I don't blame you for doign a story line like that, as I'm comic-izing a story my friend made currently. Maybe you could take some jokes and turn them into a comic, like the academies or something like just comics. if your going to start a story thats long, and has a plot you need to have it planned out though. and also you need to deal out a comic a week at least.
Blogs: ARGGGGG!!
Bands: Muse, The postal service, stuff like that =p
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