My Feelings over Earth
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Written by Newton on February 11 2008
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Interesting, isn't it?
Such little kindness in this hell-pit.
I have found friends to comfort this time,
Although even they cannot stop this crime.
Living in a world of hate and displeasure;
Horror beyond anyone's reach or measure.
If one benefits you... does it benefit the other?
Some have abundant kindness to smother.
In this pit of doom... only evil flows.
Only a touch of kindness roams.
If only the world were a better place;
If only we could have a taste.
Of what it's like not to be daunted.
Maybe some minds wouldn't be so haunted.
Affairs and displeasure, components of torture.
None actually compare to the real deal; a pain we can't nurture.
This "real deal" we call, it's known as hell.
Its name always rings a bell.
Evil... evil... echoes far and near.
Unknowingly lurking us... it's always here.
You may not want it, but we are not tougher,
This may not sound good, but we will all suffer.
But there is still hope; God gave us a chance!
Take it! Take it! Don't even try a second glance!
You will be rewarded, not with money or gold,
But with everlasting happiness, forever told.
All who read this take this bit...
I cannot; for I am a hypocrite.
You may have known, you may have not,
Either way, spread this word lot.
I have failed, I have sinned.
Do not fail; not for me, but for Him....

Comments
Couldn't you have just typed a paragraph =P
It seem like the it's the world's longest haiku
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o.o your school project isnt it...i got a huge one, just check one of my first threads o.o
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