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Written by Swiz on September 22 2007
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Well i was waitting for something to finish downloading so i decided to write a little story
WARNING:
1.has alot of grammer and spelling errors
2.has a crappy ending
3.enjoy
Hi,my name is Jason.Alot of people just call me Jay for some reason,but im not here to talk to you about that im here to talk about how i found love.
I was never a ladies man matter a fact never even had a girlfriend but when i was younger i had a crush on one of my friends.We always used to play together
when we were younger but even though we had a gap between are age i some how still liked her.Its not like we were 7 years apart
it was just two years but when i was younger that was alot for me.at the age of 7 i was forced to move to Canada which ment i wouldnt see her anymore,
even though we tried to stay in contact we just stop talking less and less.Sometimes I would dream us being together like we once was.
Two weeks after we moved to Canada i started school,the teachers would treat me as if i was a dumbass like just because im not from there dont meant i dont know
how to speak jeez.The kids wouldnt talk to me so pretty much i was a loner.When i became 9 my father passed away seems he was messing
with some gang and was shot,but to tell the truth i didnt feel sorry at all because he was never there for me all he ever did was
beat me up i was really kinda happy to see him pass away.So since my Father passed away my mother didnt see a reason to stay there
since we both kinda hated it there.We moved back to America by that age i tottaly forgot about Kasie(the girl i was talking about)
so pretty much i stayed a loner all the way till high school(yea i suck but you try finding a good friend when your school is infested with gangsters.).
When i went to high school i tried to blend in with everyone else so i came out of my shell and started talking to people for once.
Three weeks into high school i was late for class and when i went to the scanner i saw someone i thought i would never see it was her I didnt believe my eyes
i kept starring at her and walking as she was their packing her bags didnt even notice me.I couldnt believe my eyes i thought it was my mind playing tricks on
me till that same day when i was walking in the hall way i saw her agian but this time i wasnt as happy as before because i saw her with her boyfriend.My
heart felt like it was takin out of me i couldnt see it so i just left the school(yes,the officers at my school are very lazy and dumb).
I just kept walking around for hours till i decided to go home,next day i got in some real truble in school for leaving school.It didnt really matter to me i just stop caring about
stuff till one day in lunch she noticed me and stepped up to say hi and stuff.We went home together and we talked a little and she told me that they broke up
because he was cheatting on her she said that she never really liked him and when she said she saw me she wanted to go out.Of
course i told her yes.

Comments
Wow, is it true? If so, sorry, man. At least it ended well

But i can't help but comment on your grammar and spelling mistakes. You have so many run-on sentences and wierd statements like "Stopped talking less and less" .do you mean you were talking less, or you stopped talking less, by which you mean you were talking more?) You really should try harder to post more grammatically-correct. It really helps when you don't have to guess about the meaning of things you say and take sentences apart and re-read just to figure out what you're saying. If you're in high school, you really should be a lot better at writing than this.
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