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Watch the RL Death Note movie if you haven't. It beats the anime and manga.
Bands: Linkin Park, Papa Roach, Des-Row~
=P heya
Bands: Angels & Airwaves, Alice in Chains, Billy Talent
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Bands: Skillet, Three Days Grace
.... ONE SEC LEMME THINK.... Okay I'll get it to you.
Bands: In teh beginnin Ceiling Cat maded teh skiez An da Urfs, but he did not eated dem
Naice bannur.
Bands: Skillet, Three Days Grace
Tell Syke I need a hug.
Bands: LOTS :D
Hellow. :3 How are j00?
Bands: LOTS :D
If I did..You might not agree with the layouts and such =/
Bands: IDK. :D
Bands: someone make me a banner nao >:O
.:Comic Review:.
[The Good]
`Good plot so far.
`Humorous.
`Good character position+panel background.
`Nice credits.
[The Bad/Needs Improvement]
`Do NOT, ever, ever, mix rl pictures with maplestory. They just don't go along. Unless you do an amazingly good job and mixing them together, don't use them.
`Don't make it seem as if a story was told unless the whole story is going to be viewed in third person view.
`Make text easier to read by giving more space around them and enhancing the speech bubbles.
`Put more thought in the common sense part. (Third panel; There's two speech bubble tails on "So you want.../...get $1?" If both people are saying it, the "Aye, young ONE" wouldn't make sense.
`Make credits a little smaller.
`Find a good background, if you can't, make one.
.:Review Finished:.
Good job DeathDragonZ 
Bands: "Theres electronic genre, and there's Daft Punk genre"
Spam much? 
Bands: IDK. :D
Besides that, I like the comic 
Bands: IDK. :D
Edit: Title has to be slightly bigger and more obvious..You can't really see it Lol.
Btw. Make sure my face is FEMALE, the one in your banner is a guys Smoochie X-x
Bands: IDK. :D
Hmmm..You need more frames and make the order a little more obvious..
Improve the WHOLE Layout, Make it the title and credits a slight more smaller, so you can fit more in, Next, make the frames all around the same size (Just to the eye, doesn't have to be perfect by pixels lol.) Make the speech bubbles a tiny more clear o: Like, Leave some room around the text so it looks better, OH AND DONT FORGET MORE HUMOUR! ohoh, If you wanna make it look more clear, save it as PNG or BMP.
Bands: IDK. :D
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